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kimbobway registered: 7/16/2004 00:00 posts: 1242

yeah i wrote this at like the age of 6 Badman Is Here On a marooned island long, long ago there was a pirate. She was a girl and she was a kid too. Her name was Kim. She had an eye patch on her right eye, because she wanted to wear it. She had a sword. Someone else was an the island. His name was Badman. He jumped out and they had a sword fight. Kim poked Badman with the sword and he went away. But Badman left his parrot, so Kim kept it. She taught the parrot how to talk. When the parrot knew how to talk, the parrot said, "Polly want a cracker." Badman said, "Will you join me?" Kim said, "OK." They were happy, but Kim said, "How did you get nice?" "Because I liked you from the start," said Badman. THE END my mom said it's my first romance story haha. i'm pretty sure i wasen't thinking of it when i wrote it but whatever, it's open for interpretation haha. it's always nice to find crappy crayon pics and stuff from when you're little. :D now PRAISE THE STORY!!! PRAISE IT!! haha

posted: 11/14/2004 18:39

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SqueeX25 registered: 9/1/2004 00:00 posts: 1019

Bravo!!! That brought a tear to my eye..*sniff* Oh man, I LOVE looking through old stories and crap from when I was little. I started writing stories before I could even write, so they were basically just pictures. I used to know exactly how the stories went just from the pictures. Now I look at them and go, "Uh....?" I remember one particular story I wrote when I was like 5 called, "Too Many Piggies!" This one I did actually write words for, along with pictures, but its really hard to read now because I mispelt everything so horrible and butchered every single word. I think it was about this girl who lived on a farm with all sorts of animals, except for pigs. And she really loved pigs, but she didn't have any so she was sad. So then she was walking one day and found a sparkly rock so she picked it up. Out came a magical faerie who told her that she would grant her one wish. So the girl, of course, wished for lots and lots of piggies! But she immediatly regretted her wish when her farm was overrun by hundreds and hundreds of them! They were trashing everything and trampling the poor girl. So she called for the faerie and begged to take back her wish, but the faerie wouldn't let her because she couldn't take any wishes back. And so the girl was trampled by all the piggies and died. And the moral of the story was, "Be careful what you wish for." That's a pretty sophisticated story for a five-year-old, eh? I mean, thats the story in my own words now from looking at the pictures and deciphering my scrambled, mispelt, messy sentences.

posted: 11/14/2004 18:46

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SqueeX25 registered: 9/1/2004 00:00 posts: 1020

... Oh! And I also remember this series I wrote when I was in pre-school I think, called "The Rainbow". This one of my picture-only stories, so now when I look back at them I have no clue whats going on. All I remember is it was about this girl who makes friends with this magical rainbow...like, the rainbow can talk...and has human characteristics...and the series was about all of their adventures...really messed up...Oh and the rainbow dies in the last one. And then I think the girl almost commits suicide or something because she is so sad. (This is just from looking at the pictures...) Gosh..and I wrote this when I was like 4 or 5..

posted: 11/14/2004 18:49

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kimbobway registered: 7/16/2004 00:00 posts: 1243	wow, those stories are so much better then my badman story! my story is all over the place and really has no point, hehe lucky i write a wee bit better now. :D yeah your stories are awesome for a kid, do you still write?
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Stupid piece of crap registered: 7/19/2004 00:00 posts: 1287	Wow what good stroies Kim you should become a writer.
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I'm barely legal registered: 11/8/2004 00:00 posts: 52	those are really good stories when i was little i just writ stuff about sad things like.... wishing i wasnt alive and stuff or sometimes about why i wasnt a nice person its kinda depressing going through all those things for me
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00chaz registered: 7/19/2004 00:00 posts: 423	I used to write crappy stories about computer game charecters. God, im a geek!
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souponastick registered: 10/4/2004 00:00 posts: 459	mine were always almost completely illegible and usually comtained someone called Lucy and various My little ponies....
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POLLYNAPOLEON registered: 9/23/2004 00:00 posts: 580	Well... I never really wrote stories when I was younger. I used to draw like crazy, though.
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SqueeX25 registered: 9/1/2004 00:00 posts: 1021

... I'm still writing stories today, yes. Although now they are a bit um...longer and...more sensical. Well, some of them at least. I still write retarded random stories with my friends. But I write serious stuff too. Oh man I was reading through more stuff from when I was little...god I can't believe how stupid I was lmfao. I was reading this one story that my first grade teacher was like, so amazed at and she thought it was like the greatest thing in the world and she even wrote a note to my parents that said something like, "Never in my 20 years of teaching first grade have I come across a piece of writing so wonderful for a first grader. Never have I come across one who actually writes complete thoughts and organized sentences" and blah blah blah... Well I reread this masterpiece story and uh...it was the most retarded thing I'd ever read. I mean, there's this one part after the princess unicorn gets captured by the evil dragon who is planning to kill and eat all of the magical creatures in the land, well she says "I have an idea. How about instead of being enemies we can all just be friends?" and then the dragon is just like, "Oh ok! Good idea!" And then they all live happily ever after....I was in hysterics the story was so dumb. And this is what my first-grade teacher was getting all spastic about. Of course, then I read some of the stories of my other friends that were part of like packets and stuff, and their stories were um...erm...discombobulated sentences that didn't even make sense or have a plot or story at all...so I can see where my teacher was a little surprised by my work...

posted: 11/15/2004 15:02

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bloodymary13 registered: 7/21/2004 00:00 posts: 364	kewl!! awesome story!
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